Jax Komuro ~ Close Your Eyes.. }{ DONE!

[Jax Komuro ~ Till I Collapse..]

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♦♦ it feels like A KICK IN THE TEETH

and I CAN TAKE IT

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FULL NAME. Jax Komuro
NICKNAMES. 'The Spikey Haired Dude'
AGE. 16
BIRTHDATE. Oct. 6. '94
GENDER. Male
SEXUALITY. Straight

TRAINER CLASS. Trainer.

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FACE CLAIM: Anime/Manga
[b]Taskashi Komuro from Highschool of the Dead[/b] - [i]Jax Komuro[/i][/blockquote][/size][/color]

♦♦ I will stand RIGHT HERE AND BIDE MY

time until I can TAKE WHAT'S RIGHTFULLY MINE

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Jax can be very stubborn, especially when he's fighting for something he believes in. He knows right from wrong and he knows when not to cross the line on a personal level with some people. He can be very VERY sarcastic when he meets someone he doesn't like. However, he has the ability to make friends but in some cases they go as quick as they came. He's a somewhat unique person but the truly unique thing about his personality is that if he's relaxed, he'll take things in his stride but when he's explosively through the roof angry and bordering nuclear explosion, he's not exactly the easiest person to talk to.
He wears a black jacket that has metal hooks on the collar allowing him to 'button' it up whenever he feels like it but he mostly leaves it open and he wears a red long sleeved shirt underneath. He wears black pants and black shoes. His hair is wildly naturally spikey, you'd think he has gel to hold it up. He carries around a pair of black fingerless gloves he can wear, along with a bag that goes around his waist and so many pockets on it. The bag is also adjustable so he can access different parts of it without straining his arm around to reach.

[/b] Like any hormonal 16 year old, girls. He likes baseball (if they even have it xD). Pokemon battles, pokemon and above all, he likes people who know what they're doing, knowing wrong from right etc. He likes dark, fire, poison and dragon-type pokemon. His girlfriend.
DISLIKES. Snotty idiots aka rich kid wannabe trainers and people who don't do right in his eyes. He dislikes fluffly, electric and leaf pokemon.
GOALS. To beat the Elite Four, Raise his pokemon to become the strongest they can be and destroy all evil.
FEARS. Losing his pokemon, dying and losing his family.
SECRETS. Never uses gel in his hair, it's naturally spikey! And he's secretly trying to fight to keep the girl he loves in his arms by rising up against Team Rocket, when he's got the 'ammo and the arsenal' for it.

HISTORY.He was born in the Johto region and moved to the Matsunoki region at the age of 15, his family wanted to get a good education but he thought he had that at Johto, he grew tired of arguing with his parents over what he wanted and what they thought he wanted. Despite the fact they argued, they loved each very much and it would be the death of Jax to lose his family and vice versa. Jax had a girlfriend a few months after he settled in but a few weeks into dating her, her father told her infront of Jax she isn't allowed to see him for damn near no reason and Jax was left feeling heartbroken for weeks on end, until the girl came to him told him that her father moved her elsewhere because her father was in Team Rocket. And the first thing Jax did was explode and a day later she was taken by her father to go with her mother elswhere in the region, he did alot of research on Team Rocket and just reading what he had, made his blood boil. He thought for two good solid months about what to do then he finally figured it out after his birthday, he'd become a trainer and rise up against Team Rocket while at the same time becoming stronger and his main goal was to (decievingly) beat the Elite Four but he was really out for some form of Redemption and Vengeance on Team Rocket (mainly the girl's father but why take down one, when you can aim for the entire of Team Rocket?). He knows he isn't alone in his goal but where he starts, the chances of meeting someone with similar, if not the same goals as him is very slim. Maybe he'll find a companion or a group to travel with on his journey and help him achieve his quest.
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♦♦ Hollywood Whore PASSED OUT ON THE FLOOR

I'm sorry BUT THE PARTY'S OVER!

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YOUR ALIAS. Jax. (Though it isn't my real name, it's what I'm changing it to when I leave college.)
EXPERIENCE. 4+ years of rping on a chatsite called Haunting Echoes before being engufled in the world of forum rping for 3 years.
OTHER CHARACTERS. None.
MEMBER TITLE. Make Me or Break Me..
CONTACT INFORMATION. You can reach me if it's desperately important on my msn - [e-mail]
OTHER INFORMATION. Loves to be random with song lyrics at times.
SECRET PHRASE. Nigel Oak!

ROLEPLAY SAMPLE.(This sample is a sample from ZapdosZulu the site that I found MR's ad on. Hope it's good enough ^.^)

"Each man is the architect of his own fate." - Appius Claudius



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PART 1 - Fate (The Nathan Cole Story)



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It was a bright sunny day, no no, 'twas a bright lovely day, the sun is shining, birds are singing and not one drip drop of gloom or doom! Ooh? What's this? A Charmander and it's trainer walking around the outskirts of New Bark Town. A voice calls out at the Charmander.

Voice: "Hey Fate, don't run off to far now. I'm not chasing you if you get stuck between a bunch of trees."

The voice was kind, joking and gentle. The Charmander merely smiled, as if listening to the trainer but Charmanders were known for their natures to make training difficult for their trainers.

Voice: "Ah..Here's a good spot to draw. Hey Fate, do you want to watch me draw?"

The voice spoke again, the Charmander nodding it's head at the request as the trainer sat down against a tree, pulling out his big sketchbook, finding a blank page to draw on. He pulled out a pencil case and picked out a sharp enough pencil to sketch with, he begin to sketch the Charmander sitting opposite him, looking at him draw with inquisitive eyes. He merely chuckled and continued until Charmander decided to join in and he peered over the edge of the sketchpad as the trainer took a moment break and petted the Charmander on the head which he recieved a gentle purr-like noise from the Charmander.

Voice: "You really like having your head petted don't you Fate?"

The Charmander nodded, moving beside him and sitting next to him and watching him sketch, seeing himself being drawn onto paper. He ooh'd and aah'd in his own language, amazed at the skill of this trainer's artwork. Even for a Pokemon, art is one language they understand. After he finished sketching it, he began to add some details and bolder outlining, making it seem simply realistic. The Chamander waddled up and posed again for the male, as he looked up at Chamander and continued to draw. He finished adding the details and bolder outlining, now it was time for the colours and finishing touches. He went to reach for his colours and Charmander moved back beside him, looking at the almost finished piece of art. He moved a small clawed hand to the paper and pointed at it then himself.

Voice: "Yes, that's you Fate. You're a pretty Charmander, but you look better than my work of art."

The Charmander gave a happy noise and snuggled with the trainer's side, as the trainer began to add the finishing touches and then signed his name on the bottom of it like any artist would. His name? Well, it said on the page "Nathan Cole", he wrote again on a spot of emptyness on the paper "This is my Charmander, this is Fate." he read it aloud to the Charmander who just nodded gently, happy with what he put. Wow, never in all my life have I seen a Charmander so content with it's trainer.

Nathan: "Well, shall we set off again Fate? I'm hoping to see a pokemon around here somewhere."

The Charmander nodded, getting up and began to walk ahead, but stopped and waited until Nathan, his trainer was ready to go. Nathan finished putting away his sketchpad, colours and his pencils back into his bag which went around his shoulder. He walked ahead when he and Fate saw something rustling in the bushes not too far ahead, the trainer and pokemon moved ahead slowly, looking at the bush until...


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“Fate chooses our relatives, we choose our friends.”

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♦♦ Life Starts Now YOU'VE DONE ALL THE THINGS

that could kill you somehow BUT YOU'RE SO FAR DOWN!

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[raito]

Alright, Jax! There are just a few things that need to be fixed before this profile can be awesomely accepted.

First off, you're going to need to fix some coding issues. The three image slots at the top of the profile are for three icon images, not a full body pic. You're going to need to find an icon to put up there in place of the image you have now.

The hexadecimal colors for the character name font should be 9E637E for the first letter of your character's name and 000000 for the rest of them, that way the colors of the rest of the profile match.

And then, with code, your general personality and general description should be coded like:
[b]GENERAL PERSONALITY.[/b]
Personality paragraph here
[b]GENERAL DESCRIPTION.[/b]
Description paragraph here

That way, they're easy to identify as what they are, and the text isn't all bold.

Finally, your history. I'm sorry, but it's a tad bit too vague to just say 'her dad was part of Team Rocket and that's why they couldn't be together'. I'm going to have to ask you to specify what sort of relationship there was between the girlfriend and Team Rocket (like what sort of position her dad held in the group), or to change it to the dad being ex-Team Rocket.

Let me know when you've made these changes and I'll gladly look over your profile again!